Participles of verbs are often used to introduce subordinate
clauses, which give extra information about the main part of a sentence (known
as the main clause). It’s important to use participles in subordinate clauses
correctly. The participle should always describe an action performed by the
subject of the main part of the sentence. For example:
Mrs. Stevens,
opening
the door quietly,
came into the
room.
[Subject] [Participle]
In this sentence, the present participle (opening) in the
subordinate clause refers to the subject of the main clause. Mrs. Stevens is
both opening the door and coming into the room.
Sometimes writers forget this rule and begin a sentence with
a participle that doesn’t refer to the subject of their sentence. They then end
up with what’s known as a dangling participle, as in this grammatically
incorrect statement:
Travelling to Finland,
the
weather got colder and colder.
[Participle] [Subject]
Strictly speaking, this sentence means that it is ‘the
weather’ that is ‘travelling to Finland’, which obviously isn’t what the writer
was intending to say.
The sentence needs to be reworded to make the meaning
clear and to make it grammatically correct, e.g.:
As I was travelling to Finland, the weather got colder and
colder.
Or:
Travelling to Finland, I found that the weather got colder
and colder.
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